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Reviewer: Tien Ho Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/09/09 - 03:45 am Title: Chapter 1

If you divide it in to a lot of part and begins with bullet point, I think it gonna be easier to read. Don't for get make the size of text bigger. It make the readers feel this paragraph shorter.

Author's Response: You can increase the text size yourself. If you look in the top right corner, you will see: - Text Size + . Click the + as many times as you need to increase the font.

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